In our world, there are set rules that we must follow.
Don’t drive over the speed limit; don’t make a scene in public; be polite to
others. Our lives are intricate, each person having their own story, their own motives
and unique ideas. The same ideas apply to film. When creating an entirely new
world, you have to create rules that the characters must follow, create consequences
for their actions, and make sure that each of the character’s lives are unique
and interesting. Filmmakers are able to do this in a visual medium, making
their works some of the most emotional and impacting things people see.
Throughout the course of the next two months, I’ll be reading Movie Making Course: 2nd Edition
by Ted Jones and Chris Patmore, and making a short film of my own.
There are three main stages in filmmaking: pre-production,
production, and post-production. However, before anyone can start in
pre-production, they must first think of a story. A great way to think of a
story is to just write. As stated in the book, giving myself regular periods every
day to write can foster ideas, whether good or bad. Then, once I have a good
basis of a topic, I can then branch off and delve into deeper and more
complicated ideas (Jones and Patmore 10). The question I constantly asked
myself was “What message do I want to convey?” All of my teachers have told me
that a good story isn’t told unless it means to teach you something. I hoped to
achieve that same goal.
After doing some brainstorming, I decided to create a
story around abusive relationships and the idea that looks can be deceiving. To
help encourage the details of the story, I wrote down sentences briefly describing
scenes that stuck out in my mind. These scenes existed in the 1st, 2nd,
and 3rd act of the story.
After thinking about the premise of the
story some more, I then created a step outline, as suggest by the book. “By
writing a step outline you can see how your script is developing, where
rewrites or revisions may be needed to control your script, and check how
successful you are communicating your story” (Jones and Patmore 11). By
creating this outline, I was able to examine how I could create a cohesive
story and how that story would help convey the theme I wanted.
I then moved onto fleshing out my characters and making
sure they were interesting and round, a character type discussed in English
class. I wanted to ensure that the two characters, named Noah and Violet,
seemed real, with scenes in the film that would show you this. One tip that the
book suggests is to think about traits that the characters have, and then to
create moments that would showcase these traits to the audience (Jones and
Patmore 13).
Another
thing I did to help create more realistic characters is to do the previous tip
stated, but with the character types we’ve learned in English class. I did this
because in my personal experience, a character that is flat and static
throughout an entire story is like watching statues exchange pleasantries.
Character development is crucial to a story. Making sure
that I know my characters inside and out allowed me to ensure that the story
itself would be interesting and captivating, perhaps making me a little bit of
a better storyteller. Hopefully I’ll be able to capture the same depth of the
characters in-camera. As I finish up this post, I would like to pose a question
for those of you reading: do you think
that it’s important for a story to tell a message, or do you think that perhaps
a story can be good for just entertainment, even without a message?
Works Cited
Jones, Ted, and Chris Patmore. "Where's the Story?" Movie Making Course, 2nd ed., Barron's
Educational Series, 2012, pp. 10-13.
Good question - I am trying to think of a good story without any message and even simplistic stories - like kids' cartoons tend to have messages - they may not be very complex or even always intended, but I cannot think of even the worst story that has no point. The best stories, and movies for that matter, all have resonating messages that are well-developed in my opinion. This is what sets sub-par writing apart from great writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ms. Robison! I agree with all of what you said, that all good stories have well-developed messages. I hope to also achieve that same idea while creating this film. Hopefully my message will be able to be clearly understood by the audience without being blatantly stated.
ReplyDeleteHello Drew! To answer your question, i think that it's important for a story to tell a message because messages are what makes the story go around. Usually whenever there's a story with no message, no one really talks about it but if your story has a broad and universal message that people can relate too, that's what i think makes people start to talk about the story.
ReplyDeleteHey Jason, thank you for the comment! I agree with what you're saying, that broad messages are what makes a story able to be conversed. I'm hoping that the film I made achieved that and that the message I was primarily trying to convey was easy to understand.
DeleteHiya Drew! It's so interesting reading about the process of film making because there's so much that goes into a movie that I didn't know before! I think messages are very crucial in a story because they provide purpose and guidance to what a film or other forms of art want to portray. I strongly believe that stories need to have messages to be entertaining because without messages, the ideas and plots of stories cannot properly be formed. Amazing post, look forward to seeing how your movie turns out!
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you so much, Diana! Your comment made me smile a bunch. I'm glad you liked the post! In reading your post, I agree with what your saying, but I feel like a story can still be properly formed without a message. For example, you could create a story of someone going through their daily life, and that could form a cohesive story without a message; albeit quite a mundane one. If you'd like, my movie's already posted! The link is currently in my most recent post.
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